lonely

how i feel most days

 

 

 

                               lonely

   why am i so lonely-- im on my own with jesus,iam

   sat here on my own no one talks to you, no one

   wants to know ,no one to share a cupa ,no one at

   all , why i am small in body but big in heart,why

    am i own my own,why am i so lonely

 

Author's Note

this how i feel most days i dont know why i suppose its because i am a lonely person and i think there is more people that think the same they just dont say it cause they think noone cares

Reviews

[Carole]

Well, if you know Jesus (as you say you do) you will NEVER be lonely, my friend. EVER! The twenty years I have known him have been the BEST years of my life and looking forward to the next twenty and there after unless He returns sooner for His elect. All emptiness and loneliness is a thing of the past. God Bless You and Pray You Have a Wonderful day Indianhost!

BTW, how ironic....I have the same BEAUTIFUL picture that you have chosen for your piece! Don't you love it?

[Sorrow The Dark]

well, ermm i dont know how iam going to comment but i will say this, being alone is sometimes good as people around you all the time drives you crazy thats what i think anyway.....there is a sorrowful note to this poem and thats why i am here from the blood filled shadows to say well done

[Fantasyfairy]

A sad poem here about the saddness insid that no one ever sees. But some do care hun, and you are never alone. Even when I am busy, you are always in my thoughts and I will always be with you. XX

[Blue Sky]

it seems you strike a familiar chord with our own lonely instruments,
it does tend to be like that, and how others might see you/us might
not look as lonely, I have to say I can't find time with loneliness it has
a different wording...to being content on own, I find so ways to connect
to the moment as alone, it's my own time, and I enjoy it. I do a lot of
connectivity with my surroundings, and they take quite well to my thoughts.
Very well penned this one was! Great job with your most inner feelings
of the well known emotion, loneliness! Excellent!!