"cinderblock"(bi-polaroid android kodachrome catacombs) pt.1"

"cinderblock"(bi-polaroid android kodachrome catacombs) pt.1"

A Poem by stephen dillon
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angry,frustrated,dark,humor

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Slamming fists of frutration onto the cold cement walls of my

mind, cracking from every angle and chipping apart at random.

Drunk with emotion i fight agaist myself,evreychance I get to

break my own legs I jump from rooftops into femur cracking landing

stips.

© 2013 stephen dillon


Author's Note

stephen dillon
short and simple

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I want a second verse!

Posted 6 Years Ago


stephen dillon

6 Years Ago

maybe just for you
Annie Ale

6 Years Ago

:)
stephen dillon

6 Years Ago

i wrote one check it out it's called manic it was written per your request
short and simple are sometimes the best take
let it out, now that it is on paper, your whole damn body's safer
now quietly sshshsh thank you for sharing*)_

Posted 6 Years Ago


I talked to your shrink, it sounds like a temper tantrum...if only breaking cement would make us feel better...but smashed bones just equals more hurt...maybe try a quiet time out...go for a walk...listen to some classical music.

Posted 6 Years Ago


stephen dillon

6 Years Ago

definetly a tantrum i had a bad hair day
Muse

6 Years Ago

lol
i like this =)


Posted 6 Years Ago


stephen dillon

6 Years Ago

could you be alittle more specific on what exactly enthralled you?
Ironygirl

6 Years Ago

Simple and brutal.
I like it man. No bullshitting just here in your face.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

6 Years Ago

thats it just the bare bones of a minimalist poem i knew you'd like it creeper
Strips . Now tie the rhythm, to a thread.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

6 Years Ago

explain this further if you don't mind i really don't get what you are saying
lee von cleef

6 Years Ago

Zac Brown "Colder weather video" your short is packed with action,rhythm, as it ends it leaves you b.. read more

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Added on January 16, 2013
Last Updated on March 13, 2013
Tags: angry, frustrated, dark, humor

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stephen dillon
stephen dillon

savannah, GA



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savannah GA local poet and muscian trying new things if you wish to cantact me my phone number is 912-352-8110 so call with any offers please [email protected] more..

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