writing right is hard

i don;t know it just sounds good outloud

 

Write what you see you say well i can't seem to spot s**t maybe it was all left in the 50's and 60's in the back of a ford by the lake dirtited up under the feet of two young and awkward neckers drunk from malts and do-wop hits. Which by the way are composed by sex crazied fiends trying to entrap innocent little lovers into early reproduction leading to an overpopulated world to coincide with the entire nostalgic goverment sex malt consiracy

Reviews

[Joseph M. Shea]

Diffence, Rather off the cuff and hard. Like a kid being scoked for taking out to late. I wonder if you only write to hear your self talk? I'm not up on verything and maybe this is over my head, Take care, Joe

[stephen dillon]

ok prof.dickhead first i don't hear myself talk thru my writing schizo much? i do it to fullfill my self and btw plenty of ppl like my style and not everything i put out is perfect it is however a real way to watch an artist grow

[Joseph M. Shea]

I'm no prof. But I have been writing along time. Sorry I didn't really get you. But all writing is a good thing.I red more than one of your pieces and maybe I'm just not the one who you are treing to reach. But live and let live is my motio. Joe