"Human Dogs"

kind of a look into my morales

dirty minds fill my days with unwanted scheming by people praying to the theivery gods of no morales finding neverending ways to pull the wool over the worlds eyes but not quite tight enough to where we cannot see what these scumbag slithers of the bottom depths of a rotten gene pool somwhere are trying always and forever but come what may these "human" dogs will never get the satisfaction of truthfull freedom in the eyes of the...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[s y e]

Its a 'big bad' world out there, not as we all hoped or imagined it to be, we seem to survive off others, its quite sad actually, this took my breath away. Wow

[Ruth]

Yes! Excellent, the claustrophobic passion to this is defined...the ending left open...decode and reach epiphany further than what this gives, intelligently done xox

[Frieda P]

So many words come to mind, humanity, truth, good intentions...it's a dog eat dog world out there. I can't breathe sometimes when I read you, your run on sentences take me by surprise, but they always work, love your style!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write.

[stephen dillon]

come what may these "human" dogs will never get the satisfaction of truthfull freedom in the eyes of the...
fill in the blank competiton?

[kublakhan27]

It's a nasty world out there, no doubt about that, and it's mostly thanks to us...I like how you've presented your anger in a poetic kind of way with some really strong imagery...well done.

[stephen dillon]

thanx i really love your work and to hear this from you multipule times is really a huge morale boost

[kublakhan27]

Thank you my friend, your support means a lot.

[Holly Mason]

deep look into how you look at the world and protect yourself
I much like your title choice
I feel the energy put behind your words
thank you for sharing

[stephen dillon]

holly despite your style of writing i am glad you enjoy works from my drug induced mind

[Holly Mason]

despite my super style*)I read with an open heart and mind
I think that you write from your soul and I like it drug induced and all*)

[stephen dillon]

haha very true