"Do Ya' Love Me"

"Do Ya' Love Me"

A Poem by stephen dillon
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my take on the difference between my style of art and the random untalented hipster "art" of today i usually get lumped in with

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Eyes dry and aired from being wide open, like the churchs doors for every wild sinner to confess into the marble walls exactly what no one has been waiting to hear, but with all the confidence in the world dry eyes shakes down the completion of championship thoughtless art like these yippes staring at a Colon Pollock deciding on which color scrambled egg he will buy, obviously the culture is in the cornsyrup captured in carbohydrates and cancerous hormones so survive at your own risk, throw your arms up shout mased potatoe and let your brain do the twist.

© 2013 stephen dillon


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stephen dillon
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An explosion of metaphor and simile, very visual, think this is one of my favourites today, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


exhausting, stupefying modern life...so well captured! I love the way the last line speeds up the feeling and pulls it all together--it makes the entire piece work.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I did before this, now I'm not so sure...ha, kidding. Your writes are always of a totally different caliber probably why I find them so intriguing...I love the Colon Pollock, scrambled eggs reference!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

idk? I love it.. I think it's out there and fun.. Open for interpretation by each individual that reads it. I smiled at the last two lines..lol... excellent..x

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lily Mae

7 Years Ago

:)
xo
stephen dillon

7 Years Ago

yep it is just mean and thats not what a review is
Lily Mae

7 Years Ago

Well some forget this is an online internet site for all people to express their emotions through wh.. read more

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Added on April 11, 2013
Last Updated on May 3, 2013
Tags: dry, eyes, shout, twist, brain, eggs, egg
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stephen dillon
stephen dillon

savannah, GA



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savannah GA local poet and muscian trying new things if you wish to cantact me my phone number is 912-352-8110 so call with any offers please [email protected] more..

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