Intrepidity

Intrepidity

A Poem by Kate Visorro
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When fear dominates your world, be an intrepid mortal.

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I n t r e p i d i t y

Time passed by and darkness began to rise
Then the world had created dark grey skies
When nothing else seems to have any sense
And all you do is cry in deep suspense

The notion of bliss in this world seems surreal
Yet nothing can stop the excessive zeal
When everyone else lost their inner faith
Be brave and start the fight; it is your fate

The world is not fair; it kills with its flare
It eliminates people in thin air
Yet when fear dominates your own portal
Stand up and be that intrepid mortal

© 2017 Kate Visorro


Author's Note

Kate Visorro
I wrote this poem to mirror my current emotion and to lessen the feeling of excessive frustration.
I allow criticisms as long as it'll help with the development of my skills.
Thank you and happy reading! :)

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wonderful story,no criticisms

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kate Visorro

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
 wordman

7 Years Ago

my pleasure
A great poem to uplift spirit. Keep going. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kate Visorro

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
super liked it :)
u have a potential. i literally read it twice

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kate Visorro

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
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Added on March 18, 2017
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Tags: fearless, adventurous, heroic, impalpable, unafraid, undaunted

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Kate Visorro
Kate Visorro

Bacoor City, Region IV-A, Philippines



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