Oh, Gentleman

Oh, Gentleman

A Poem by InkBlack
"

about a guy I'm 90-95% sure has a crush on me.

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Oh gentleman,

You are a compassionate person,

Always putting my safety and happiness into perspective,

And leading me away from danger.

 

Oh gentleman,

You are a thoughtful person,

Always trying to put my needs above yours,

And changing your disposition around me.

 

Oh gentleman,

You are a loving person,

Greeting me with a warm hug,

And transporting me to mental paradise.

 

You want to protect me and impress me,

And your love is real.

You seem perfect.

So, why don’t I love you?

© 2010 InkBlack


Author's Note

InkBlack
my first draft had a lot of cliches, so I tried my best to get rid of them.

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not bad at all actually it's nice, I love the last sentence, 'so why don't I love you?' XD

Posted 10 Years Ago


not bad, I liked it,
and know who its about,
but I won't name names...
lolz
I liked...
"You want to protect me and impress me,
And your love is real.
You seem perfect.
So, why don’t I love you?"
So what did the first draft sound like??? Out of randomness...

Well good poem
m/(>.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2010
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InkBlack
InkBlack

Under a Tree, WI



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I'm obviously a writer (why else would I be here?) but I have other interests/hobbies as well: PAINTING PHOTOGRAPHY (preferrably analog) ANIMAL WELFARE more..

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