Five Deadly Words

Five Deadly Words

A Poem by InkBlack
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I was going to elaborate on this, but then I decided not to.

"

Bleed,

Fume,

Rot,

Cry,

And die.

Five words that encircle your thoughts

Lingering like stagnant water,

And fatal like cyanide.

© 2010 InkBlack


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No need to elaborate...it is the as you say a fatal cyanide...

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow! i really like the last three lines.
i'm going to be thinking about this for a long time.
(it does exactly what it says...encircles and lingers)
excellent, i think, with vivid images
but strangly enough, im not thrilled with the actual 5 words

Posted 10 Years Ago


i really like tihs to. Your very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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InkBlack

Under a Tree, WI



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I'm obviously a writer (why else would I be here?) but I have other interests/hobbies as well: PAINTING PHOTOGRAPHY (preferrably analog) ANIMAL WELFARE more..

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