Five Deadly Words

I was going to elaborate on this, but then I decided not to.

Bleed,

Fume,

Rot,

Cry,

And die.

Five words that encircle your thoughts

Lingering like stagnant water,

And fatal like cyanide.

Reviews

[Art]

No need to elaborate...it is the as you say a fatal cyanide...

[Zeke McKnight]

wow! i really like the last three lines.
i'm going to be thinking about this for a long time.
(it does exactly what it says...encircles and lingers)
excellent, i think, with vivid images
but strangly enough, im not thrilled with the actual 5 words

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

i really like tihs to. Your very good.