A Poem by Raven Lane

October 15, 2014

It is exquisite, yet taunting to be this much genuine and compassionate
I love with all that I am and I mean everything I say 
I am careful, wise, and gentle 
It terrifies me to think that maybe, one day, you may not feel the same 
With possibly time and reality
I am certain my mind won't change because I, not only thought about this long and hard-whether or not you're the one I want but I also get this feeling in my chest that feels like a tsunami crashing in unexpectedly on an empty city
Just like when I fell in love with you 
I have this certain reassurance that you are my other half, I don't even have to do the math
I think we could build a raft and float away in the aftermath of your tsunami and anywhere we ended up would be absolutely beautiful
Because you are there

© 2015 Raven Lane

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Nicely put
Very moving.

Posted 6 Years Ago

An enjoying piece.
I like it, good piece of work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I enjoyed this piece. Good job Raven! Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Such a great piece of work! Such emotion :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

that was really great, it has a lot of emotion in it, lets a great story in short form!!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 16, 2014
Last Updated on February 15, 2015


Raven Lane
Raven Lane

Lilburn, GA

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