Tsunami

October 15, 2014

It is exquisite, yet taunting to be this much genuine and compassionate

I love with all that I am and I mean everything I say 

I am careful, wise, and gentle 

It terrifies me to think that maybe, one day, you may not feel the same 

With possibly time and reality

I am certain my mind won't change because I, not only thought about this long and hard-whether or not you're the one I want but I also get this feeling in my chest that feels like a tsunami crashing in unexpectedly on an empty city

Just like when I fell in love with you 

I have this certain reassurance that you are my other half, I don't even have to do the math

I think we could build a raft and float away in the aftermath of your tsunami and anywhere we ended up would be absolutely beautiful

Because you are there

Reviews

[Harmony-Lee]

Nicely put
Very moving.
xo

[Saddam]

An enjoying piece.
I like it, good piece of work.

[JD Jessop]

I enjoyed this piece. Good job Raven! Keep writing.

[Jamie]

Such a great piece of work! Such emotion :)

[Justin]

that was really great, it has a lot of emotion in it, lets a great story in short form!!!! :)