Mother & Son

Mother & Son

A Poem by Devesh


Cradled in her arms,
sleeps an innocent soul.
As white as a dove,
he has known only love.
His face rests upon
the shoulder of his mother.
His gentle breathing like the wind
blows into her hair,
they scatter all of a sudden
no worries, no care.
But in this chaos she finds
the peace that she craves, 
and the strength 
with which, the world she braves.
For him.

© 2014 Devesh


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

no greater love than that of a mother for her son.

i agree with David on that awkward spot...bottled up the reading a bit there...but even in its simplicity i like the words and theme here, and sometimes that works just as well as complexity and abstractness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, Jacob! :) I'll change those words, almost forgot. Thanks for reminding me! :)



Reviews

If there is one person whom hands becomes heaven to a child, it is the mother's embracing arms. Wonderful, just wonderful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is breathtakingly beautiful. Marvelous work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Currently being reviewed on Mother's Day this is about the only way I'd describe a mother's love. Thanks for this

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a beautiful expression of the love of a mother for her son.
Well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was surreal and beautiful Devesh. Nothing like a love for a son from his mother.

~Stefanie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Stefanie! :))
A beautiful poem for mother and son. I believe nothing as beautiful. The good description took the reader to good thoughts and beautiful places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, Coyote :)
"But in this chaos she finds
the peace that she craves,
and the strength
with which, the world she braves..." amazing ! That's so true ! Very well penned :) Your poems are short yet have a lot in them ! Cool!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :))
Hope

9 Years Ago

welcome ! :)
This was a wonderful piece, Devesh. It was simple but terribly lovely! Very nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

One of the best reviews I've ever got! Thank you, Elina :)
Elina

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome!
As a mother, I can relate to this feeling - the love we have for our children is like no other love.
Your poem is beautiful

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie! :)
The love for a mother for her children is a very powerful thing.You have penned this beautifully :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, Vidya :)
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome Devesh.Nice to see you :)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

770 Views
23 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 9, 2014
Last Updated on April 10, 2014

Author

Devesh
Devesh

Hannover, Germany



About
"Isn’t God supposed to be good? Isn’t God supposed to love us? And does God want us to suffer? What if the answer to that question is yes? ’Cause I’m not sure that God particul.. more..

Writing
A While A While

A Poem by Devesh


Lilies Lilies

A Poem by Devesh


The Gate The Gate

A Poem by Devesh



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..