An old soul reborn

We're all old souls

begging for new starts

every little detail

blooms our new beginnings

but we never quite die

our life lessons still age

we bring our times with us

through our new journey's

as we venture

we grow

we learn

we age

life takes us away

on our new paths

keeping our old memories

trailing behind

but never too far

as we grow

as we learn

as we age

we are reborn

we're all old souls

begging for new starts

every little detail

blooms our new beginnings

but we never quite die

Author's Note

just random thoughts, feel free for the advice, its poor i'm aware lol and terribly long Dx

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Its not that long. I don't think it has that many devices in it, but there is a message there. I think the repetition is pretty good. I don't think it really takes away from the piece. I would say the main thing here would just be adding a little more here and there, and making a few adjustments to the content.