Kiran And Shamir

the rising of conflict between Kiran and Shamir.

"Did you enjoy today?" Kiran asked Shamir friendly.
Shamir lost his  interest in his mother's  yelling but he came out of the interest when she said "Shamir" loudly,
" Yes what are you saying?" he said, came out of thinking of her mother's anger while driving the car.
"Where are you, I am asking did you enjoy today?"
Instead of answering her question, he asked her seriously "why did you wear hijab today in wedding?"
Kiran astonished on the question of Shamir “what are you asking" she said sarcastically "you know I am habitual of wearing hijab, by the way why are you asking".
He was cross for a long time but not expressing, but her question made him too cross that it was coming on his face "because of your hijab wearing habit, I have to listen my mother's yelling" he angered while he was driving, he pointed out her hijab "just because of your hijab I can't enjoy the, she was angry on you but you're too busy so she yell on me she shout on me to make herself relax".
Kiran was astonished "I've already told that I don't want to go in wedding but Sidra  pleased me a lot" she said seriously “that’s why I came otherwise I wasn't coming when mummy told me not to wear headscarf in wedding".
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Ahmed was working on recorder after having dinner. He pushed on of the right side button, the recording started to play "sir, I think Muslims didn't do anything wrong they just took revenge from us" recording was playing "If our country with Israel launch drone planes and assaults then in return won't they take revenge from us" he notice that it was the first person speaking in the favor of Muslims along making them responsible for that tragic event that's why a second person warned in the recording "oh mister you are American and before it you're Christian  you should speak for us not against us!" after the warning of third person third person declare angrily "he will not speak for us until he will not suffer from the tyranny of our police" he called his guards and ordered them to imprison him.
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Kiran and Shamir were at home. They were in their room. Kiran was sitting on a bed, looking at her husband's angry expressions constantly speechlessly for a few minutes. Shamir went in washroom for changing clothes while she was sitting on front of the mirror, taking off her jewelry. "Why are you not sleeping here?" she asked respectfully to him when Shamir picked up the pillow and going out of the bedroom after coming out of the washroom. "No, because I can't tolerate anymore" Shamir replied angrily, looking in her eyes then he left the room. Kiran was speechless.
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Shamir went upstairs for sleeping. He laid down on the floor and put his head on the pillow but his anger kept him awake.
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Kiran was cross too. "Didn't he know before marriage how I am, then why is he over reacting? She slept earlier than Shamir after changing clothes.
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"Ameena, why did you scold Shamir in front of us when everyone left the hall and Kiran too for a few minutes"
Kamran (father of Shamir) said to his wife "you are familiar with the nature of  Kiran, she is strict hijabi".
"Aren’t you familiar with my respect in my social circle!" Ameena exclaimed.
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"Sadia, aren't you sleeping!" Ahmed exclaimed, he crept the door of the bedroom.
"no, I'm not" she replied tensely "in fact I can't".
"oh Sadia why are saying this" he said while coming in the room to sat on the bed "why are you considering that my article will bring negative change?" he asked.
"No I am not" she replied "in fact I want your article bring positive change".
While sitting against the bed and straightening his legs he sad recklessly "so why are you saying you can't sleep?”.
"Because the place where we are living is against Muslims, that's why" she replied "but you leave it".
"Yes you should leave this topic" he said while taking off his glasses and making his tie loose “because I want to sleep"
"don't you want to change your clothes?" she asked.
"I will" he said while looking at her "when my eyes will open at midnight then but I want to close my eyes" he said, laid down and within minutes he slept.
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Next night Kiran was getting ready for Valima (function) while Shamir entered the room “where are my clothes" he asked.
"in the cupboard" she replied while wearing earrings.
After wearing scarf she was ready and Shamir too after applying perfume and combing his hair. The conflict between them resolved. His mother accepted his wife's hijab. They went for Valima with blushing faces.
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Author's Note

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Reviews

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Dear Irenic,
I was lost in your story here and it does have vibration and wave of a new wind in Pakistan. I already told my credibility that I am not an expert in prose and I wish I could help you more except the fact that I am completely drawn wide in your wonderful piece of writing and a future for Pakistan. You have to realize the signs are very alarming for muslims and we all know who are best and worst behind all these wars going on without purpose but I like your honest and courage in this story.
Kiran was sitting on a bed, looking at her husband's angry expressions constantly speechlessly for a few minutes. Shamir went in washroom for changing clothes while she was sitting on front of the mirror, taking off her jewelry. "Why are you not sleeping here?" she asked respectfully to him when Shamir picked up the pillow and going out of the bedroom after coming out of the washroom. "No, because I can't tolerate anymore" Shamir replied angrily, looking in her eyes then he left the room.
These are my favourite lines and you have to work seriously on your prepositions and unfold all your main characters because it is important that every main character should play an important role and mostly you have done an exceptional job but it requires more then enough to be there where you want to be?
I truly believe the success will knock on your door soon and I wish you all the best and am extremely sorry for my late review.So I hope my words her will excite you with joy and love for your writing and God bless you and he is the main character for our lives who cover us and recover us from every pain and bearer in our lives.

With much love and respect,
Sayed Mudasir

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this story. You are giving life and understanding to the characters.
"Ameena, why did you scold Shamir in front of us when everyone left the hall and Kiran too for a few minutes"
Kamran (father of Shamir) said to his wife "you are familiar with the nature of Kiran, she is strict hijabi".
"Aren’t you familiar with my respect in my social circle!" Ameena exclaimed."
I like the old customs. Respect is lost when we lose the old ways. Thank you for sharing the excellent chapter.
Coyote

[Irenic]

My pleasure dear......................................:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. A powerful story.

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful story and with a great lines of conversations. Anytime conflicts are resolved, it is better for both sides of the equation...Bravo........

[Irenic]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Dear Irenic,
I was lost in your story here and it does have vibration and wave of a new wind in Pakistan. I already told my credibility that I am not an expert in prose and I wish I could help you more except the fact that I am completely drawn wide in your wonderful piece of writing and a future for Pakistan. You have to realize the signs are very alarming for muslims and we all know who are best and worst behind all these wars going on without purpose but I like your honest and courage in this story.
Kiran was sitting on a bed, looking at her husband's angry expressions constantly speechlessly for a few minutes. Shamir went in washroom for changing clothes while she was sitting on front of the mirror, taking off her jewelry. "Why are you not sleeping here?" she asked respectfully to him when Shamir picked up the pillow and going out of the bedroom after coming out of the washroom. "No, because I can't tolerate anymore" Shamir replied angrily, looking in her eyes then he left the room.
These are my favourite lines and you have to work seriously on your prepositions and unfold all your main characters because it is important that every main character should play an important role and mostly you have done an exceptional job but it requires more then enough to be there where you want to be?
I truly believe the success will knock on your door soon and I wish you all the best and am extremely sorry for my late review.So I hope my words her will excite you with joy and love for your writing and God bless you and he is the main character for our lives who cover us and recover us from every pain and bearer in our lives.

With much love and respect,
Sayed Mudasir

[Irenic]

And sorry for thanking you after a year:) but thank you for such a lovely review :)