Green is with Black

Green is describing the goodness and black is reflecting the negativity. I try my best to convey that every person has a soul made of flower and the thorn of it too.

Lets go and find sapiens in green cloaks

I said to myself going at cache

Sapiens in green cloaks i have found in disclosing workshop

Wearing black cloaks on this land

Green cloaks are being wore by everyone

But the verdure of cloak express

When takes place in life by ship of melancholiness

Green cloaks are being with black cloaks

By everyone in this ecosystem

To attempt bluff in fray

Green is with black in ecosystem's tray

Which is the purest green is immutable in this bay

Author's Note

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Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

a great write...yes more people need to swap their black coats for green!!

[Irenic]

thank you ........................................:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet. We are a bit of all things. I liked how you made the statement understandable. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Irenic]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Irenic]

:)................................................

[AaronFreitas]

Nice write... the world would be a better place if there were no black cloaks :) Good work :)

[Irenic]

Thank you for appreciation :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Wearing black cloaks on this land
Green cloaks are being wore by everyone
But the verdure of cloak express"

[Irenic]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................

[Roshan Nair]

Nice write irenic, your message is subtle and the language is straight forward, it is a great way to write and I really liked this one, cheers! :)

[Irenic]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

We need to find goodness in people in general and have a good workshop on personalities. A powerful write. ...:)....

[Irenic]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[MsJewel]

The most positive person can be negative at times - I believe it is human nature. Your poem is well written and a pleasure to read.

:) Julie

[Irenic]

Thank you so much