A Poem by Irenic

Sea at daytime attracts me the most. These all are my thoughts which I used to write after seeing it from the window of van.

There was nothing so plain than sea at day
Its plainness is not nothingness but has also the presence of nothing
May be because of this everyone attracts to it
Same case is with me
The sea at day blushes the heart out up at mouth to see that plainness which can only be felt
But it is also unable to see it not because of having no eyes but because of absence of that sight which can bear it, understand it and most importantly comprehend it.
It touches the cell
It touches the vein
Letting the message to pass
Pass to the end of self of ours
Of its furs moving in rhythm as wind moves
of its legs stepping where the destiny takes
Of its eyes showing its constant awareness
Given to him by the love for this world
It moves
It shakes
Under the sun
In the dawn
But look so plaine
But plainess is not so vain
It pours deep down the blood
And resides in that world
Becomes it's part
And shines as art
Under the deep ocean
Beneath the shallow sea
Everything seems so plain
And so vain
That dries the whole ocean of yours
And left your heart without oxygen
Letting the plainess to drench in every ventricle
And make canopy in every artery
Which make the whole soul lifeless
And every vein numb enough to feel nothing
That nothingness has the ocean of reality
And fountains of reality has pain
In that painful plainness of the ocean at day
Find those moments when light paints seven colours on the surface and make the whole world to take break from its race and gaze its every face.

© 2019 Irenic

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Hi Irenic, I do love to see the water, it draws me to it as does this wonderful piece you have written. The sea has truly inspired you to write a wonderful piece of poetry. Your words paint a true and honest picture. Plain but beautiful. Have a wonderful Friday....Mike.

Posted 2 Months Ago

I loved the poem dear Irenic. I love the sea. A place, where we can relax, think and learn. I enjoyed the description and the thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote for appreciation:)))))
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear friend.

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Added on July 3, 2019
Last Updated on July 3, 2019
Tags: Plain, sea



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