A haiku

Bearing no conscience,

I'm to behave psychotically,

Like the Willow Tree. 

Author's Note

This is a free from haiku. It's not meant to be in it's traditional form

Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

not sure what are putting forth here?

[Ben]

I like this. Quite a bit. Short and simple, which I suppose is how all haikus are haha. But I normally don't enjoy haikus that much. Yours was very nice though.

[irishsam]

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you liked it.

[krish]

Nice Haiku... liked what you wanted to say. But can i know the meaning of II'd line, sorry but i'm not sure it's "I'M TO BEHAVE" is or is that "I'VE TO BEHAVE"... !
if you don't mind, so, can i ask... ?

allover was nice, theme, concept and words. Well written. !

[irishsam]

In the second line, it's supposed to say "I'm free to behave psychotically" I guess I forgot to edit that. This was the first piece of writing I posted and I had some issues with adding writing and posting. Thanks for pointing that out!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME and MANNER..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

[pupz333]

But it IS in it's original form, my dear redhead! It goes 5 syllables, 7, then 5 again. :D

[irishsam]

I know! I have to edit it! But it won't let me save me edits! Grrrrrrr....I will get it soon.

[pupz333]

You don't have to fix it. It already goes 5-7-5. :P

[irishsam]

But it's not written to be like that. I forgot to edit it before I posted it. :P