Dream

Walking on a dream
Floating above reality
Imagination roaming
Dreaming of better days
The world in my head
Happiness
Smiles
Laughter
Satisf action
Ever after
No greed
No hatred
No war
For your family
For your friends
For your sister
Your father
Your brother
Your mother
Something to live for
A world for each other
Not for yourself
No poverty
No sickness
No disease
All these moments freeze
Freezing somewhere in time
Forgiven and forgotten
My world is free
Moments of bliss
Moments of men, woman and children safe
Nothing to hide from
No need to run
I am happy here
Happy here in my mind
Happy where the world is kind
Happy here within my head
Until I awake
And my dream is dead

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"no greed, no hatred, no war"?
that's a dream i want to be in...but i agree with you...i think happy is only going to be in the mind...in reality, the world is so screwed up...

[don't know]

Thanks man you explained in words better than I could. Even though i wrote it.

[stars are far]

its like UTOPIA .. And yeah .. well dreams are the from reality..
and for me well since my bf broke up with me ..i sleep about 14 hours per day .. i think its my savor from eveything.. you run away from the reality..

your poem portrays the peace you have in your soul and mind.. and well it shows your desire for that peace.. well done.. keep that coming :)

[don't know]

thanks for your review "you run away from the reality" well put.

[stars are far]

you are welcomed :)
my pleasure

[Sami Khalil]

Dreams can live and die. Up to us to embrace or reject. A marvelous write...:)............

[don't know]

true words my friend thanks for the review. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I like the concept. I'm a dreamer, too.
Many of us tend to dream because only in there we can make those things that we like to be in reality.

Nice job!

[don't know]

thanks for taking time to review my poem. :)