sometimes eye are

part of my bio for my new blog: http://eyeareblue.blogspot.com/

sometimes i are blue
sometimes i are turquoise
sometimes i are red
sometimes i are volcano


other times i are thumbnail
and other times... i are glucose


i are always breath
i are always fluid
i are always spark
i are always brown.

Reviews

[Alessander]

my English background just can't get over the "i are" lol it's like a nail clawing against a chalk board...but other than that, I like the rhetorical structure and naturalistic imagery. The thumbnail and glucose were a bit out of nowhere, but judging by where they're at, I guess they're supposed to be. And I'm not sure about the 'I am always brown' line cuz "brown" usually is always connected to, you know lol or ups, which is worse.