Deflated

Deflated

A Poem by Marissa

emptyemptyempty,
fill me up,
EMPTY,
why am I so damn EMPTY,
a deflated balloon, 
and you the helium,
why,
you get me high for a short time,
there's a hole in me,
the size of my hope,
so small,
and your efforts go to waste,
still I am,
empty
emptyempty,
emptyemptyempty,
forever I am hollow on the inside.

© 2010 Marissa


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This is nice work. The hole that keeps this soul
from ever being able to flourish at its best was
both emotionally and visually striking.

You made good use of repetition as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I haven't used this account in years so I'm not sure that I'll stick with it. I am 18 and living in Kansas. My name is Marissa. I've changed a lot of over the last several years, maybe for the better?.. more..

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