confession of my hate of myself

confession of my hate of myself

A Poem by itsjustme

my eyes are embarrassed
my heart is in my stomach
my feet lack progress
my ears hear grief
my emotions are up and down in my chest
my creativity is flabby and flat
my worth is shame
my body is a waste
and only my depression breathes

© 2010 itsjustme


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Not a positive poem. The pain and hurt is stated strongly and with no hope. A powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


sad and so self depreciating. Such words are worrisome but the piece itself is an eloquent expression of this feeling of self.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 25, 2010
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my life as a poet started when i was a freshman in high school. there was this girl that i was going out with and i decided hey, girls like poetry ill write some. at first i rote only about her and .. more..

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