under our god

under our god

A Poem by itsjustme

another temple
another piece of stone
expanse on the god we all pray to
another church
lets all go home

selfish to our god
selfish to the land
not true to our ancestors
selfish to our religious views

let us take a catholic
let us take a christian
listen to their disputed view
let us stop the bicker

he is our love
he is our grace
does he differ in our hearts?
he is our own creation

if he was watching over us.
would we criticize who's religion is right?
would we live on so recklessly?
would we continue to bicker?
we all need the same home

© 2010 itsjustme

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Added on November 22, 2010
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my life as a poet started when i was a freshman in high school. there was this girl that i was going out with and i decided hey, girls like poetry ill write some. at first i rote only about her and .. more..