Darkness

Darkness

Darkness is fast.

It is fast for it is in the past.

It is in the past so do not clash.

The darkness likes hash browns with a dash of mash.

If only you could smash the darkness then it would not stash the light away.

The light is hiding from the darkness in the hay.

Because he is afraid that the darkness owns a bay that pays.

But some day the light will come out to make the darkness pay.

Reviews

[Lizardo]

Defetinily one of my favorite poems by you this is truely one great poem that I'm still in awe from it.
The last line: '' But some day the light will come out to make the darkness pay''
You know, this would actually be a great story if it was made.
Great poem!

[iveltac]

thanks for reviewing. and i plan to make a story about it several people have told me to.

[Lizardo]

It would be great, Because the last line makes want to read a story about it, I feel likes this could be the Intro

[iveltac]

that is a great idea.

[Cool Girl]

I like the ending!!! You have to writ a story about the darkness and light fighting each other!

[iveltac]

ok ill do that for you a story or poem.

[Cool Girl]

YESSS!!!! I'm happy now!

[iveltac]

ok il write thestory about it and death the narrator. and you can be in it.

[Cool Girl]

Horray! I get to be in it!

[iveltac]

:p u can be killed rolf

[iveltac]

im joking dont panik

[Cool Girl]

Lol I wasn't panicking... :P

[iveltac]

:p lol your not gonna die but im wondering where to put you.

[iveltac]

nvm have an idea

[Cool Girl]

lol! :) Okay

[iveltac]

you be rainbow lady :p a rainbow silk dress and you float on a rainbow and your staff is a rainbow staff. :p very imaginative. :p

[Cool Girl]

Ohhh I like rainbows!

[iveltac]

:p youll be in the secound chapter

[Cool Girl]

Okay! Cool)

[Cool Girl]

I meant to write :)

[iveltac]

lol meant to write what. Lol

[Cool Girl]

I meant to write one of them smiley symbols that look like :)

[iveltac]

:0 oh lol like this O.o

[Cool Girl]

Yeah... :p

[iveltac]

Rolf.......

[Cool Girl]

haha yes...