Death

Death

A Poem by iveltac

Death


Death is like bad breath.


It is not pleasant and is simply strange.


It smells sourer like a peanut.


But peanuts taste like tree nuts.


Tree nuts are gross like a nose.


Death is compared to a stinky nose that is stuck in a hose.


The hose then poses for a photo which then slows.


Death is deadly like a medley.


It can stab you several times and you hurt like scabs.


Death is horrible simply unstorible.

© 2015 iveltac


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Death smells like peanuts?? You have offended Mr. Planter!!! Poor guy...he's pulling his top hat over his face now. He is self concious of his bad breath... And the posing hose is trying to choke up the nose, but it's really stuck in there good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luvs2write

8 Years Ago

Well, I'm a vampire...so we can be friends =)
iveltac

8 Years Ago

lol that is nice.
luvs2write

8 Years Ago

Yes...it is nice. It's also unfortunate though, because since you are already dead I can't suck yo.. read more
I like it! You should write a story where death is the narrarator! Sorry for all my suggestions :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

:p thats what all the ladys think. Rolf
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

lol that made me laugh really hard..
iveltac

9 Years Ago

oh boy :p ok lol

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iveltac
iveltac

Middle Earth, KS



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