Friends

A poem about friends

Friends

Friends that what you are.

You make me smile and laugh.

even if i hate math.

My friends that is what you are thoose 

who make me laugh and giggle.

CG Dan Steve and lizardo are the people that make me smile.

Keep up the work and go the extra mile. :)

Reviews

[Nix]

I can't help but think your whole profile is a joke... please god tell me it is. Your parents must have raised you well

[iveltac]

:P. It is a joke. Everything like where i live is kinda a joke. i love joking ecpecialy in my writings. I think im gonna make a poetry book sometime and only take my funny ones. And my parents did raise me well. Thanks for reviewing.

[GeekyGamer128]

Playful and fun. Good Job.

[iveltac]

Thank you for reviewing it middle.

[Devanshu Rajput]

"Friendship is the only relationship that we can make according to our own volition"

A short, yet nice poem.

Thanks for sharing.

Devanshu

[iveltac]

Thanks for the review man.

[Wolven]

This is quite a nice poem. There's really not enough poems on friends these days either. :) Good job man.

[iveltac]

Thanks Wolven

[steven]

*cough* *cough* *cough* i think you're *cough* missing somebody in your *cough* list

[iveltac]

Lol Steve dont worry ill add you. Better now?

[steven]

yes lol its perfect now

[iveltac]

im glad it is

[nazia]

Friends are one of the most prized possessions.. rightly said :)

[iveltac]

Thank you for agreeing with me.

[Who This]

Great poem, its something we can all relate to! I just feel like going and hugging my closest friend lol

[iveltac]

lol whoose closest? Your dog? :p lol Thanks for reviewing.

[DoormanDan]

I smiled on the lines "you make me smile and laugh even if I hate math", that's a great line. Without friend's, what point would there be to life? I have to admit that the main reason I like school is just because I'm with my friends. This is a great poem :)

[iveltac]

Thanks Dan

[Lizardo]

Ah my god I was reading this an I was about to put ''You left lizardo out of the party!?'' xD
But then I saw my name and I was like Aw never mind xD
I'm thankful to have you as friend and the thing is actually reverse, you make me smile and laugh
wich is really weird because I rarely smile to something thats a joke or something in those context
Your humor makes me smile when I come dying from school xD
You are also a great Writer Iveltac, don't forget that! And this poem is very lovely
Did enjoyed a lot, Made my day
Thank you (sorry for the long review, my heart really is jumping from happiness right now :p xD)

[iveltac]

:p thank you lizardo. No id didnt leave you out. Im glad you liked it. and yes school is death. :p

[Lizardo]

It's like being trap in a box :p

[iveltac]

Lol and then giving nothing but paper work to do

[Lizardo]

Amen, Nothing good to do except talk with your friends

[iveltac]

:p yepp i agree

[Cool Girl]

Yeah, Lizard Princess is telling the truth.. He truly NEVER smiles xD

Sorry, I kind of had to say that

[Lizardo]

Why? like no joke, why xD

[Cool Girl]

Because I haven't called you that in such a long time
And it's like a cool inside joke that we have! :)
And I know that it makes you laugh, so yeah!

[Lizardo]

Yeah I know xD I was just joking xD

[Cool Girl]

I know you were xD