You (Again)

You (Again)

A Poem by coma black☯

I hate this affect you have on me,
how weak you can make me just by saying three words.
I hate how vulnerable I am around you,
how awkward I can be.
I hate everything you do to me. 
But maybe I don't,
maybe I'm just overwhelmed right now. 
I'm trying to work it out.
I don't know what to think about you now. 
The only thing I know is that I don't wanna think about
you at all. 

© 2012 coma black☯


Author's Note

coma black☯
Kind of bad and stuff but yea...idk

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Beautiful expression of a feeling I know well. Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


not bad... its cool....nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this. I personally find it extremely relatable, so maybe thats why i feel such a strong connection. I like how you are able to state your feelings and thoughts so bluntly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


its certainly not bad! its very good! enjoyed the switch from direct definite statements to the doubt of the later lines. very feminine and for reason i'm not sure of, shy. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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People call me Amber. I'm 16. I listen to Pierce The Veil. I hate boys. Yeah that's pretty much it. more..

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