Time

Time

A Poem by Rhonda
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Clocks slay time... time is dead as long as it is being clicked off by little wheels; only when the clock stops does time come to life.

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I’ve tried to kill you,
when all along you have been killing me.
 
I hate you time.
When I was young you blinded me,
took your time.
You betrayed me.
You would never come fast enough,
then one day you came too fast.
You took my every breath.
Killing me slowly.
 
I love you Time.
Give me more of yourself.
Show me how you can stop,
take my breath away.
 
 

© 2008 Rhonda


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This is great!! The love/hate relationship is clever, as is your play on words. Very creative work. Well done!

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