light or dark

light or dark

A Story by Syra

I used to be light. Maybe I still am but all I can feel is the wave of darkness that courses through me, enveloping me with nothingness. It's like a light bulb that slowly fades, leaving a trail of darkness behind until theres nothing left. No real feelings of happieness, no joy, no pleasure, no nothing except all of those dark feelings: depression, rage, madness. Now i can't stand the light; it burns me. I welcome the darkness even though I know i may never be able to get out again. Even though I know i may never be able to love again.

© 2011 Syra


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Dark and haunting, a few grammar points: 'corses' should be 'courses' and 'exept' should be except, apart from that the darkness is poignant and real with an honesty that causes a melody through your words of sorrowful beauty dragging the words into a despair of hurt. Real emotive passion pulses through your piece.

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Dark and haunting, a few grammar points: 'corses' should be 'courses' and 'exept' should be except, apart from that the darkness is poignant and real with an honesty that causes a melody through your words of sorrowful beauty dragging the words into a despair of hurt. Real emotive passion pulses through your piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that's very descriptive. You can really tell what the character is feeling. I like it. I kind of reminds me of Beautiful Creatures with Lena going Light or Dark.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 1, 2011
Last Updated on June 26, 2011
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