I am Broken

I am Broken

A Poem by Dark Angel ~

I'm broken.

And I don't know if it's because I always have been or if it's because I've stretched myself too far for too long, finally resulting in this... emptiness.

I just know that what I am feeling right now,

I've never felt it before.

And it's becoming increasingly difficult to find something that can fix me.

That can make me into what I was... or into what I'd like to be.

© 2014 Dark Angel ~


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there is only one way to go is up...once you've reach rock bottom...the idea to fix it is harder...as it lingers by the day...week...month or years...hopefully not the years...I liked how you put the feel in this write...I would break it down a bit more to get your point of view across to the reader...as is --- it looks like one long sentence...you cannot grab the impact of your words...as an example:


I'm broken.
And I don't know if it's because I always have been or if it's because I've stretched myself too far for too long, finally resulting in this... emptiness.
I just know that what I am feeling right now,
I've never felt it before.
And it's becoming increasingly difficult to find something that can fix me.
That can make me into what I was... or into what I'd like to be.
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I'm broken...
And I don't know
if it's because I always have been
or if it's because I've stretched myself
too far for too long,
finally resulting in this... emptiness.
I just know that what I am feeling right now,
I've never felt it before.
And it's becoming increasingly difficult
to find something that can fix me.
That can make me into what I was...
or into what I'd like to be.
I'm broken...
----
I'd put the "I'm broken"...in the beginning and finish to accent this feel of broken...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Dark Angel ~

6 Years Ago

Thank you I'll be sure to fix it :3
Glen Yumang Manese

6 Years Ago

you're welcome...it has the broken look feel now...too...

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Dark Angel ~
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Izzy. Short for Ismode. I write... All the time xD sadly, I don't have the time to post them here. I'm nerdy, a choir geek, and probably really, really weird. I tend to be quiet until I get to know y.. more..

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