Nightmare.

I had a nightmare last night,


I can't totally remember what it was about
I just kept telling myself it wasn't real


because in my nightmare, my step-dad had died
i dont know how, or why
but he was gone
i woke up crying, then i realized


my nightmare was true....
it's hard to believe i've gotten to the point where reality is just as bad as your nightmares

& when i wake up, i'm still living the nightmare.....

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

wow, this really is sad and i'm sry 4 ur lost... that's all i can think of to say, but things will gwt better 4 you. ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. In dreams we rebirth the pain and the good in a life. I'm sorry for your lost. When you are young. Losing someone is hard to understand. A powerful poem. I believe best thing we can do is to remember the good time and keep him alive with words.
Coyote

[Balls:)]

wow,
i know how hard it is...

but you will get better

and your poem is really something...

[gimpy]

& when I wake up, Im still living the nightmare this line rely stuck out to me but the difference is youtr sad that your step dads gone I'll rejoice in the day my rel dad dies

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very nicely written. I know the place and feelings you wrote of ..
I love this line :

it's hard to believe i've gotten to the point where reality is just as bad as your nightmares

It does happen, well done.

Chloe

[Ethan Paz]

Sad poem. Good job in communicating your poem. I would only fix line 9 to be shorter but other than that, it was great.

[mess of gorgeous chaos]

This is emotional, and strong. I can perfectly imagine what this would feel like, life as a nightmare. Good job.