Fearless

My darkest days

have faded at last;

the dawn has come

to cleanse my past.

These scars have faded

but the memory remains;

could anyone ever be there

to ease these pains?

The years have passed

the hope is dead;

can anyone help me silence

these thoughts in my head?

See I once hoped

you could be my knight;

eventually hope dies

time to ease the light.

The night has come

the shadows appear;

can I even honestly say

I feel any fear?

Reviews

[Sami Geiger]

AMAZING GIRL!

[Lucas Lima]

This writing is beautiful ^.^

[Jason Dyer]

Numbness can break away to feeling again. A stronger feeling that can welcome love again. Well structured.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

AHHHHHHHHHHHH JENNY THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

[zainul]

I am glad that ,
your darkest days
have faded at last;
the dawn has come
to cleanse your past.
This is an awesome write that shows the hope so brightly!
I am sure that you can start a new life fearlessly.

[Ruth]

Sometimes we have to purge that fear for it to dissolve as you have done here...to go through the depths is to know immersion of that fear and numbness takes over to a degree, good piece hon xoxo