Broken

Broken

A Poem by silver threaded queen

Just another face
lost in the crowd 
just a broken voice
in which the silence is loud
just a broken heart
drowning in broken dreams
deep in the woods
of broken promises
so do tell
at what point
is it deemed
"in-fixable"
"irreparable"
or just plain broken 

© 2012 silver threaded queen


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This is really quite good. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this one paused me... you spoke well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like this a lot! And I've had the very same thought. And the question at the end? I don't think any person is irrepairable - I think they just need the right medicine.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A questioning piece this and highly enjoyable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


silver threaded queen

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
The great part about broken things: feelings dreams and promises. You can discard the rubbish and start anew.

Posted 6 Years Ago


silver threaded queen

6 Years Ago

thanks bunches for the awesome feedback!!!
Very nice job, Jenny

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hard to know at what point such happens isn't it?
This is brimming with suffocating questioning...
Yet perhaps unanswerable...
Great work
xoxo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silver threaded queen

6 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy, I swear, you are the best!!
Ruth

6 Years Ago

♥ Welcome hon xo

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hey my name is jenny, i love hiking, earl grey, reading, and writing, I'm an extremely depressed human with a twisted mind.... everyone on here means the world to me and has helped me through some rea.. more..

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