Broken Perspective

Broken Perspective

A Poem by silver threaded queen

You tell her
to go to hell
but you truly have
no concept
that she is already there

in this land
of broken dreams
she allows
these broken thoughts
to mar her disfigured perspective

"perspective?" you may query 
it mar's her perspective
on love
on loyalty
and most importantly
herself

soo...
whilst you may not have lifted that blade
neverless
you were an accessory to murder
and the cause of her fall

© 2013 silver threaded queen


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"you were and accessory to murder" - "and" or an?

You weave a story - we listen... we SHOULD listen. Its what we do - listen. So speak as real as YOU ARE a real person. We do hear you.

I read poetry aloud - 3 times through. It helps me get a sense of the flavor, author's intent, and continuity. It also helps establish the flow and tone of the words. Because its 3 times, I more readily catch typo's and wrong words that even spell check doesn't notice.

You've things to say, I'd like to listen.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"you were and accessory to murder" - "and" or an?

You weave a story - we listen... we SHOULD listen. Its what we do - listen. So speak as real as YOU ARE a real person. We do hear you.

I read poetry aloud - 3 times through. It helps me get a sense of the flavor, author's intent, and continuity. It also helps establish the flow and tone of the words. Because its 3 times, I more readily catch typo's and wrong words that even spell check doesn't notice.

You've things to say, I'd like to listen.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow a powerful piece:) I have felt this way myself and can relate to the pain of this piece very well written:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silver threaded queen

6 Years Ago

thanks!!
I like it! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

silver threaded queen

6 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
nice, i like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is great!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Who is this about, Jinny?

Posted 6 Years Ago


silver threaded queen

6 Years Ago

Nothing, it's just random word vomit....
The Reverend, S. D. Blankenship DD. Ph. D.

6 Years Ago

Ok.
Wowwww... seriously nice :0

Posted 6 Years Ago



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hey my name is jenny, i love hiking, earl grey, reading, and writing, I'm an extremely depressed human with a twisted mind.... everyone on here means the world to me and has helped me through some rea.. more..

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