fallen part three

she stares at him

 

entranced

 

confused

 

lost

 

she has been stuck

 

in between the two

 

wrong and right

 

good and bad

 

pure and evil

 

for so long that

 

she doesn't even know what to do anymore

 

she looks at him

 

and confirms what her insticts tell her

 

he is bad

 

but she is done

 

done trying

 

someone has finally reached out to her

 

and she takes it

 

they go to the tree

 

they lie beneath it

 

counting the stars

 

and there they sleep

 

and to this day they still sleep

 

waiting

 

for the good

 

for he is evil and she is neutral

 

and they cannot even us out without the good

 

who will give them it

 

 

Reviews

[Victoria Elizabeth]

very good Jennie, love it!

[Tina Kline]

Very impressive writing. Interesting idea about balancing each other out. The reader is left hanging at the end. Indeed, who will help them?