Jagged

Jagged

A Poem by Jack D.

Jumbled up like a puzzle;

together on jagged pieces;

entwined, holding, but not

with an enthusiasm.

Glass against glass, creak and

shine, forever and glisten.

Take away my heart and shatter

it like a jagged piece.

Prod my mind and melt it

red hot.  Past, present, future,

through the years;

linked in time.

© 2011 Jack D.


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I like how you wrote this, not rhyming, choppy (in a good way)...I love the words you used, they paint a nice picture in my mind of what this poem is about. I love this whole thing :) Great poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creative piece. Your mind seems like it works in volumes. Good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on May 18, 2011
Last Updated on May 19, 2011
Tags: Jagged, wow, sad, poem, glass, shine, past, future, mind, hot

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Jack D.
Jack D.

WI



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Hi, my name is Jack. I am 15, almost 16, and I enjoy writing poems, stories, and journals. more..

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