Eternal Fires

Eternal Fires

A Poem by Jack...
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Love burns forever

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Eternal Fires

By jack

 

Unfolded secrets,

caress my heart

in full view of the stars

Silent dreams and whispers

breathe…

in tapestries of hope

 

Ribbons cast along the shore

in effervescent hues,

dance as

contoured waves approach

adrift, trickling…

forever a’ glow of this view

 

Touch me deeper still,

my soul

it calls out loud your name

In trumpet’s blare of desperate tones

and wishes you will

hear

 

For in this heart does rage

a torrent, washing of your

love

climbing in a fevered pitch

Reaching for

endless journeys, as

eternal fires burn

your love

forever into my soul

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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It's like you and Frieda had a baby and it produced this beautiful piece of work (I know you know that is a compliment)...what a stunning write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much and I took it as a compliment
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Absolutely.
Iridescent incandescence. Shine on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Buddy, appreciate it.
I love the last stanza in this piece it gives the meaning to your title

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Yes, one of my attempts at free verse. Thank you so much.
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I could fall into the depths of these words, and wish to never find my way out again....you embellish your words with Images as plush as velvet and soft as cashmere...I have no words worthy to offer that could ever touch the beauty within this......

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you Angel for your kind and flattering comments.
Just gorgeous, Jack! Love does burn forever, doesn't it? Deep and penetrating - it's going in the favorites! Loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much for reading and placing it amongst your favorites.
Another stellar write Jack. I love romantic poetry that does not tip over and become syrupy. Depth of passion abounds, and so it burns!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank so much Lorena, you kind words thrill me.
To truly love someone is like, is a like a forest fire very unpredictable but it is needed for the resurgence of life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you sir.
This is a Valentine poem I adore, it's so full of affection and joy, no saccharin in this read.

Touch me deeper still,
my soul
it calls out loud your name

I can't begin to tell you how many places that touched me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Frieda, coming from you that is a huge compliment. Thank you so much
A brilliantly vibrant picture your perfectly flowing, passion filled words here paint.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I am honored by your kind words. Thank you.

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Added on February 14, 2013
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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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