Which castles trace

Which castles trace

A Poem by Jack...
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Love is always a fairytale

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Which castles trace

by jack

 

Castles stand, O’ precious flow of filtered dreams and star shine glow

Upon a hill, in distant flight, beckoning this winter’s night

O’ winding road with pebbles cast and gardens rich of every past

Lay wishes made, on ripples clear of crystalline and words to hear

 

Tree top winds to serenade before the branches bent and swayed

O’er forest deep and climbing fears when rain drops fall of mounting tears

O’ breathe of this and many so, to stand of breeze fed gentle flow

With scent of jasmine on the air and rose bud petals in your hair

 

Lay colors rich and vibrant sweet, a soft caress upon your feet

In silken sheen and opal blend, o’er shaded mist around the bend

For this I bring to only you, my angel sweet and love so true

O’ every dream your heart desires and passions deep of dancing fires

 

My love, beneath this painted sky, with sparrow’s nest and captured eye

Cascades a truth of rapids pure, for this my one that I adore

So climb, I pray, upon my steed, of quickened pace and steady speed

As I will lead you to this place, of perfect love which castles trace

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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Great story progression, classic,brilliant, vivid and captivating piece. Can't ask for more. :) another great write of Mr. Jack :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much sir.
Amazing, it takes me away on a beautiful journey, loves it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
lovely. :) wonderful imagery

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
O' !!!!!!!

I came, I read, I screamed O' !!!!!!! ;-)

Then I gave you 100/100...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you sO' much my dear friend
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

;-) Always...
Perfectly lovely. ^_^ I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much
Wow Jack divinely beautiful, took me to a gentler world where true love exists.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Welcome to my castle, M'lady. Thank you so much.
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks
After the first stanza, I realised that this poem flows too well for one that doesn't rhyme, so I had to start again and see why that was. It was then that I spotted the rhymes, and began to appreciate the source of the rhythm and flow much more.
The content is as beautiful as the structure and rhythm, and it makes one hope that maybe one day that fairy tale love can come to be, or as close as possible to it we can get

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words and creating a bright spot in my day.
Beautiful imagery. Beautiful word flow. Beautiful poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

thank you for your beautiful comments.
Beautiful, honest, heart sweeping poem, amazing!
the pure imagery in this one glitters in front of the reader to enjoy!
beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aurora

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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