The Perfect Combination

The Perfect Combination

A Poem by Jack...
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We go good together

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The Perfect Combination

by jack

 

 

A-1 on your sirloin

Butter on your bread

Chocolate on your ice cream

Or butterscotch instead

 

Cream cheese on your bagels

Jelly on your toast

Maybe peanut butter

Which do you like the most

 

Salsa for tamales

Lemon for your fish

Onion dip for vegetables

Delicious on your dish

 

Pinto beans in chili

Carrots cooked in stew

Bacon on your meatloaf

Chicken cordon bleu

 

Chives on your potato

Sugar in your tea

Pickles on your burger

Crackers for your cheese

 

Garlic for your pasta

Sauce upon it too

Milk poured in your cereal

Slices of fresh fruit

 

Gravy on your biscuits

Sausage would be nice

Cocktail sauce for jumbo shrimp

In a bowl with ice

 

Syrup on your pancakes

Frosting on your cake

Cream upon your peaches

A salt and pepper shake

 

Caramel on your apples

Seafood and white wine

Cottage cheese upon your pears

It’s so much fun to dine

 

Mayo on your sandwich

Ketchup on your fries

Dressing on your salad

Whipped cream on your pies

 

So many combinations

That we see each day

When we’re having dinner

Breakfast, lunch or play

 

To enhance each other

Nothing left to waste

Flavors come together

In the name of taste

 

There’s one combination

The best one I can see

Not to do with eating

Because it’s you and me

 

So perfect now together

Like ham on top of cheese

Lettuce and tomato

Onions in your peas

 

Or mustard on your hotdog

Relish on it too

The perfect combination

Is always me and you

 

Wonderful together

Sometimes sweet or tart

Soft and always tender

This love inside our hearts

 

Of all the combinations

Only one will do

That is when my arms are wrapped

Tightly around you

 

Combining of our hearts

Knowing that it’s true

This combination built on love

Forever me and you

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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Very sweet. ^_^ I love all the analogies!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend
This is absolutely amazing.
It is something that I would pay for to send the card to my husband. I love it.
Plus it made me hungry just in time for lunch.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Glas you liked it and that it helped your appetite. Thanks so much.
Constance Payne

11 Years Ago

Now just to decide if I want a steak, biscuits and gravy, or a hot fudge caramel strawberry sundae. .. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

That sounds like a very tough choice to make to me.
Why must you make me hungry? Lol
Well it's amazing how many of these combinations you could come up with! This is a sweet message that would sound nice on a card.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

A very big card. :) Thank you so very much. This is one from the crazy side of my brain.
Blue Ivory

11 Years Ago

Would love to see more of it lol
Well I must say first of all I think I gained 3 pounds reading this one lol... And what a delightful surprise at the ending.. I am going to have to get to my other computer so i can pull out some of my other writings.. A pleasure to read you Jack as always.. Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rose, just having a little fun with this one.
well, this is again a beautiful write...i liked this stanza
Wonderful together
Sometimes sweet or tart
Soft and always tender
This love inside our hearts...yeah, it is appropriate as i saw...as i read. well written, again you've fluttered me here by your kinda words man...liked this one.
well written, nice flow of ink

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend
a buffet of funfilled words
lacking in nothing -
but my favorite combo-shrimp and grits-like a hand and glove*)*)
dang I miss em
thank you I really enjoyed this

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I know your name is Holly, not Eileen
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I can still thinks it's funny hahhahahaha
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Yes my sweet friend, you can. Nice to know you are smiling
As long as the love is wholesome and complete, we can choose from the array of delicious garnishing and condiments that Jack has on offer here! :)

I had a mouth watering and delightful read Jack. Just wonderful. Thanks!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Divya
It makes me hungry, thanks Mr. Jack always a witty and brilliant work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Marc, just having a little fun on a Wednesday
Food. *drools* Hahaha. I loved it from beginning til the end. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend
Love the meaning behind the wrwite..not enough men are bold enough to really express there emotions aloud..let alone of a site like this..Many probably do not even express tham at home..A wonderful write..I pray she appreciates you..Valentine

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I appreciate you!

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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