I dream...

I dream...

A Poem by Jack...
"

I dream of you

"

 

 

I dream...

 

 

I dream...

landscapes of wonder, rolling hills,

shade trees a plenty, clear waters

fill my mind with beauty

 

I dream...

fountains flow fluidly of love,

butterflies live forever as

gardens bloom in the moon light

 

I dream...

happiness floats on kite tails

of gingham and plaid

blending in with the soft morning breeze

 

I dream...

soft sand drinks the sea

melodically finding its way to shore

in everlasting tranquility

 

I dream...

rainbows play in the heavens,

children sing and dance

to the music of life

 

I dream...

for in these dreams I see hope

calling out to me

in the form of your love

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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I like the way you ended it, good one as usual

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sunshine
This is really sweet and beautiful! The imagery is so nice here! Great work as always, Jack :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thank you Siren
Sand drinking the sea, rainbows watching children dance.....oh, the magical images you have created here. With dreams such as this, who would want to awaken? To have a love that creates such dreams is to be a very fortunate soul. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us, Jack. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Wow if I had dreams like this I would never want to wake up. Beautiful imagery and words, such a lovely dream. What I liked most about this piece is "for in these dreams I see hope." With love, all things are possible. Well done my friend.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Traci. I do so appreciate your kind words this morning.
Traci

7 Years Ago

As do I appreciate you lovely poetry. Always a pleasure to read your words, Jack. Have a wonderful .. read more
what a lovely dream... ..so beautifuly described...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lily
What a pleasant way to describe hope, what I like best about it, is that it seems to be found in many things. Another wonderfully displayed vision Jack. Love has many faces and all are beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much my good friend.
Astro

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
there is simplicity about your poem that is absolutely spellbinding. Your imagery is a burst of joy and colors and wonder. I could spend an evening in each stanza. Gorgeous work!


Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I appreciate your visit today. Dream on my friend.
The last stanza says it all, as usual you got me with this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing my dream with me Cassie.
Such amazing and beautiful dreams here, Jack.. love tends to do that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Lori.
Some beautiful dreams you have there, Jack. Quite the romantic ones, as well. I always enjoy reading one of your descriptive poems, they give me inspiration. Well penned, my friend. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much LSD. Happy I can inspire you, though your poetry is always so beautiful, I think it m.. read more
LadySoDivine

7 Years Ago

Oh, you are too kind. If you haven't seen it yet, I posted something new yesterday, so if you want t.. read more

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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