I dream...

I dream of you

 

 

I dream...

 

 

I dream...

landscapes of wonder, rolling hills,

shade trees a plenty, clear waters

fill my mind with beauty

 

I dream...

fountains flow fluidly of love,

butterflies live forever as

gardens bloom in the moon light

 

I dream...

happiness floats on kite tails

of gingham and plaid

blending in with the soft morning breeze

 

I dream...

soft sand drinks the sea

melodically finding its way to shore

in everlasting tranquility

 

I dream...

rainbows play in the heavens,

children sing and dance

to the music of life

 

I dream...

for in these dreams I see hope

calling out to me

in the form of your love

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'd like to float on a kite's tail....

what visions there would be...and how expressive of love this poem is...

again...we fly away with your words...and feel the romantic quality...

you would certainly turn the heads of those old ballad poets of yesterday...they would take notice of your passion and style.

[Jack...]

Jacob, coming from such an amazing poet as yourself, I am humbled by your words. Thank you so much.

[Angel]

Oh, Jack...this is an amazing piece. Every time I thnk I've read the very best you could possibly write, you surprise me with something better. I can close my eyes and see the beauty of your dream...fluffy white clouds decorated with a soaring kite, the waves gently lapping the shore...I can hear the laughter of children and the cries of gulls...I can smell the salt tang of the air mingled with the soft scent of the flowers...for just a moment, I am in paradise with you...
Lovely write, Jack...

[Jack...]

Angel love, always my smile forms when i see you on my poetry pages. Thanks more than you can know for your always beautiful comments on my poetry.

[Rita L. Sev]

*sigh*

Absolutely gorgeous, Jack - your dream images have become the pictures to carry in my mind all day...

[Jack...]

Rita, what an honor that my words might linger with you during the day. Thank you for this high compliment

[SyberRose]

I dream...
soft sand drinks the sea
melodically finding its way to shore
in everlasting tranquility

I can see Frieda also enjoyed this particular verse...beautifully penned images Jack...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sweet Rose. I am happy you found a smile or two within my lines.

[Frieda P]

So soft and melodic Jack....

soft sand drinks the sea
melodically finding its way to shore
in everlasting tranquility

Does sound like a lovely dream....

[Jack...]

It is a dream come true to have your kind words appear on my poetic page. Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[Stella Armour]

just my kind of poetry..absolutely beautiful Jack ...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Stella. I truly appreciate your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

I felt dreaming on the landscapes of wonder in these great lines of romance and fluid love...Splendid...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Sami. I just posted this not 30 seconds ago. Wow, thanks again. You are a great friend.

[Sami Khalil]

I saw it on the newsfeed. You are welcome...:)