Clouds formed of patchwork

Clouds formed of patchwork

A Poem by Jack...
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Love is all around us...you and me.

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Clouds Formed of Patchwork

 

Clouds formed of patchwork appear on this night

Slowly a’ float of a mist of light gray

Pacing the moon glow, in its ever drawn light

Silently sailing along on their way

Playfully teasing the cause of their plan

Stating the measures of empty desire

Tempting our eyes with their magic delight

Clouds formed of patchwork appear on this night

 

So many stars are a’ shine in the sky

Twinkling brightly upon the dark drape

Counting their numbers as time passes by

Waiting for sunrise to plan their escape

Diamonds reflecting the joys of our heart

Finding the patterns our souls pacify

Calling our eyes as the nighttime does start

So many stars are a ‘shine in the sky

 

Cool winds of autumn now knock on our door

Brushing the leaves of the slow changing trees

Silently sweeping the land ever pure

Simple our visions now caught in the breeze

Wonderful feelings invoke on our skin

Lasting the moments our love does endure

Long are the days now about to begin

Cool winds of autumn now knock on our door

 

All are the feelings of our love so true

Sent from the heavens so that we may see

Star light and clouds move on breezes anew

Here in this place that is now you and me

Take now my hand as we walk on our way

Oh but to share every season with you

Harmony takes hold of us every day

All are the feelings of our love so true

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Great and beautifully expressed my friend. I like the descriptions of how we view the stars, and the sharing of the seasons.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jack...

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Astro. I appreciate you stopping by.
Starlight and clouds move on breezes anew - I looked up in my mind Jack and saw the most beautiful skies as painted by your words.
Now i cant wait for the beautiful canvas that is our early winter nights
Great work J.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend. Still very hot here so perhaps a little wishful thinking on my par.. read more
This is lovely, Jack -- Simply divine. I loved your use of imagery and wording. A great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much my young friend.
lovely. That hint of fall. Very relatable. Can't wait. Another star in your poetic sky, jack.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Tammy, always I appreciate your visits. Thank you so much.
Classic Jack....Jack........Classic

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much Doc.
I love how you make the seasons come alive in this enchanting poem. Always the romantic, I don't know how you do it, but you caress us all with your tone and rhyme. A bewitching read. Beautifully crafted, my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
This sparkles, Jack! Stars are truly enchanting!!!

I absolutely love it! You always write with heart and describe such beauty... I felt the love in the air, my romantic friend!

Simply Gorgeous!~xoxo~:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Jack...

8 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Robbie for your visit. Your kind words thrill me.
The first thing I thought of was that song by Nat King Cole, the autumn leaves are falling but the harmony and depth of your words always take my breath away dear friend.... Another luverly sigh Jack.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweet, sweet friend. I always adore when you stop by my poetry.
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

You inspired me to write my own Jack....I should thank you. Always, dear friend.
You bring love to life if it is dead , the seasons to maturity if they are nigh , the words to meaning if they are scattered. Awesome...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

Very thankful for your kind words my friend.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....
Beautiful poem beautiful picture... imagery and metaphor outstanding as always..... What? out of ideas? As long as here are oceans, sunsets, seasons and women on the planet you will not run out of ideas i don't think.. lol
Rose

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jack...

8 Years Ago

You are probably correct my dear sweet Rose. Thank you so very much.

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San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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