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A Poem by Jack...

 

To share

 

I’ve taken from this endless dream

a sight for sore and weary eyes

When clouds of morning frown of dark

and winds howl in serenades for dancing leaves

 

Still life exists in rotted stumps and fallen branch

on fence lines overgrown with time

As weather changes in the east,

where through thick drapes eyes peer

 

White on white and foot step designs scatter,

erratic as the snow flake waltzes…

Another day, filled with desires beyond the pane

where fingers have etched a heart… breath exposes

 

And moisture runs downward, streaking glass

into cupped hands that long the taste

of life far removed from this frozen nightmare

and I offer my endless dream to you…to share

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Another wonderful write, rich once again with stunning imagery. Great work!

P.s.

Is there any place I may view your paintings?

Thanks.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Gleb Zavlanov

10 Years Ago

Plus, I think "branch' should be "branches."
White on white and foot step designs scatter,

erratic as the snow flake waltzes…

Beautifully penned Jack as always...love weaved with nature...very sweet indeed...Rose:)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Well , you have shared the beauty of nature , the longing for love and the power of your pen in a great images and tastes...Excellent...:)........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Smashing write, Jack. Such beauty in all your writes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You had me at "winds howl in serenades for dancing leaves" Then I got down to the third stanza which is perfect, then wrapped it up warmly in "into cupped hands that long the taste". It's sweet and comforting, I could hibernate the winter away here Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Always you shower me with kindness which wraps itself around.. read more

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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