You are my life

You are my life

A Poem by Jack...

 

 

 

 

You are my life

 

 

Simple reminders of conscious belief

Filter my mind with the moon’s silver glow

Satisfied truths sent to spell my relief

All that my beating heart now needs to know

 

Sensual visions to capture the feel

Bringing the contours of wind sculpted plains

Temptations cry out for all that is real

Filling the void that I now can explain

 

Cloudless these night skies of star sprinkled mist

Shimmering soft on the eclipse of love

Delicious the thoughts of your warm tender kiss

Found in these endless illusions above

 

Memories harbor the times that we’ve lived

Photograph remnants of places once shared

Telling the story of all it can give

Building the dreams now worth capturing there

 

Still we are standing alone on this eve

Counting the points of the bright scattered light

Dreams can come true if we only believe

Whispering prayers on this cool winter’s night

 

Hear my desires a float on the breeze

Finding their way to the one I adore

Listen, my love, for I hope but to please

Biding the time till you’re with me once more

 

Down on my knees with my fingers entwined

Solemn requests I now send to the sky

Pleading with heaven to be ever kind

Answer my prayers 'fore this night passes by

 

All that I ask shall be all that I need

Merely the chance I may prove ever true

You are my life and in that I believe

Forever my love shall be only for you

 

 

 

© 2014 Jack...


Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A beautiful heart touching poem and it's sweet with love

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lovely, melodious poetry. It drifts smoothly like velvet.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Truely wonderful love poetry. If love could speak, it would be just these words...Thanks Jack...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Divya
Very prolific and endearing. Love the first stanza, "Simple reminders of conscience belief...Satisfied truths sent to spell my relief..." Thank you sir.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you Matt. I appreciate you stopping by and reading.
I should be gathering these romantic pieces from you to send as Valentines, Jack... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Your are welcome to them my friend. Thank you so very much.
The title is beautiful, the text is beautiful, just like all your other work :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend.
Amazing, glorious, timeless piece! I am so lost for words. You have weaved a breathtaking beauty full of love, emotion and passion! Just...just...so lovely. Bound to be a classic.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Gleb. I truly appreciate your kind words.
A romantic tome for sure. I have my issues with this very premise, however, but hey, that's just me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

That's okay my friend, to each his or her own. I do appreciate though that you choose to review my w.. read more
Wafted onto my heartstrings Jack, Sye's right, you are the king of romance....how many times can I sigh, just luverly, would capture any woman's heart.

'Shimmering soft on the eclipse of love', I wish I'd written that line....sigh.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Kind words coming from an amazing poet such as yourself have.. read more
A turn of phrase that relates well and guided elegance, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thomas my friend, I appreciate you stopping by today. Thank you so much.

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

668 Views
18 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on January 20, 2014
Last Updated on January 23, 2014

Author

Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



About
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..