Thinking of you

Thinking of you

A Poem by Jack...

 

Thinking of you

 

Frozen in layers of lemon drop frosting

Running for love on the snow covered lawn

Interest in all that this morning does offer

Entering each as if only a song

                           ~

Dancing to dreams on the edge of tomorrow

Asking a question I hope will be true

Pausing a moment to glance your direction

Writing this poem while thinking of you

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
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I really enjoyed this, the first line hooked me.

Posted 3 Years Ago


That lemon drop frosting adds a new sweetness to your poetry, Jack...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks Rita...and so do you.
Awwww the sentiment in this poem is so real and very touching, Jack. "Lemon drop frosting" brings me back to my childhood....I can almost smell it between your well written lines. I enjoyed this one. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend.
Thank you Jack, that poem has made my evening. It's difficult to pen something like that without sounding soppy and contrived but you've captured it perfectly. Beautiful writing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Tess. If you keep reading on my page I'm sure you're bound to find soppy some.. read more
I LOVE THE PICTURE!

I think it is reading like a personal note to someone special in your life.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

I guess looks can be deceiving my friend. Thanks so much for stopping by today. I always look forwar.. read more
Josie E. Cook M. A.

6 Years Ago

THanks! :) I love the picture that looks like watercolor....
That's so lovely, nice to see thoughts of love filling your mind.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Carolann...with beautiful women like you visiting my page, what else could be possibl.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

6 Years Ago

That's lovely jack :)
Sweet poem depicting your thoughts of someone special.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words today.
Praveeta

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
Ahha! Jack... you're a romantic softie! Your secret is out! LOL No worries... I am to. Very nicely done! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Shhhh Raymond, I didn't want that to get out. Thanks so much my friend.
I love rhyme when it's done well and this is done so very well. Words dance off the page here, Jack, while "dancing to dreams on the edge of tomorrow" - wonderful lines. Forgive my tardiness in the read requests, life is a bit nuts at the moment and I am a bit jaded after a negative experience here. But there are poets and poems that make it worth visiting. Justine :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Justine, no problem my friend. Always happy to have you visit whenever your around. Hope the world s.. read more
I am reading this poem while thinking of how you come up with such beautiful writes. Good job my dear friend

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Well Sunshine...it is by thinking of beautiful women who stop by my poetry and leave wonderful revie.. read more

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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