Good Morning Beautiful

Good Morning Beautiful

A Poem by Jack...

 

 

 

 

Good Morning Beautiful               

 

I crave you this morning

For you are my sun

Your smile my brightness

When morning does come

 

Alone at the table

No sound to be heard

Just pouring your coffee

Not saying a word

 

I sit and I stare

Out the window this day

Such beauty before me

In nature’s display

 

Still nothing can reason

With how I do feel

When you rise to greet me

I know this is real

 

I flip through the paper

Though I do not read

My mind is a wander

Of what I believe

 

I dream of the moment

I look in your eyes

And whisper I love you

Oh won’t you please rise

 

It seems like forever

Yet only a night

The last time I saw you

A beautiful sight

 

So I sit here waiting

Until you I see

My day will be perfect

When you smile at me

 

 

 

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Oh to be loved in this way is what we all hope for dearest Jack :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

It can happen Vidya, you just have to find the right person and hopefully you have.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Yes I think I have .You are welcome sweet friend :)
I am smitten by the gentle beauty of this piece and it's unconditional declaration of emotion. This is a true ballad that would not be out of place next to Keats...I know you don't like those comparisons but I really do take that vibe from this poem. How sweet a morning such as this would be. Thank you for sharing such an openly heartfelt work my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Steve, you humble me always with your kind words. Thank you so very much my friend.
Utter perfection! Added this to my favorites :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Oh it's as if you speaking to me Jack, I jest, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thomas, how do you take your eggs? The coffee is ready. :) Thanks so much my friend.
I think it's beautiful. The meter is really well done, as a percussionist rhythm really means a lot me.
Sadly, I can't relate to it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Oh, look, Sye showed me another awesome piece!
Excellent job, Jack! You're the best romance poet I know. This is a wonderful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Katherine, you have brought a smile to this tired face today. thank you so very much for your kindne.. read more
Katherine R.

10 Years Ago

I love it when I can do that! Smiles are good!

Your welcome, Jack. It's always a pleasu.. read more
This is wonderful Jack..... you had me from "Good Morning Beautiful."


YB

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Well then, Good Morning Beautiful. Thanks so very much my friend.
Yellow Butterfly

10 Years Ago

(Now I'm blushing)

Thank you kind sir and Good Morning Handsome to you... :)
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Wow, now I'm blushing... :)
Romantic admittance of love. A lovely poem. Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sue for stopping by today.
Jack, this is beautiful. You paint such a realistic picture of affection in your poems.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rita. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Oh Jack.
This is... DIVINE.
I feel like this is something that would be spoken as a monologue in a movie, over the top of a romantic scene. You're a wonderful writer.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Brookly. I appreciate your kind words.

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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