Twilight's Shimmer - A collaboration - Frieda and Jack

Twilight's Shimmer - A collaboration - Frieda and Jack

A Poem by Jack...
"

Once more I am honored to write a poem with Frieda. Who says dreams don't come true?

"

 

 

Twilight's Shimmer

 

 

Misty mornings long for silent shade

drenched in glistening opalescent

windswept sighs on feathered breezes

seek the essence of your fragrance

 

languish in moments sheer contentment

flowers scenting the nape of the neck

eyes soak in brilliant twilight's shimmer

amidst the ginger of your aromatic flavor

 

 the sunrise blooms of your beauty

I gaze upon this tempting reflection

in limpid pools of dark sepia dreams

silently quenching my thirsty desires  

 

delights of silken'd utterances bliss

kiss upon my heart's zesty appetite

hungering for the gusto of your affection

urges of  persuasive velvet'd silent echoes

 

savoring these moonlit moments

within delicate arms, anxious sighs

 

enraptured in this tender night's embrace

floating upon gossamer clouds of your love

© 2014 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
A collaboration - Frieda and Jack



Thank you so much for reading our poem today.

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Yeah cool. Im a virgin to combo poetry. And you rascals just popped my cherry. Nice work.
I like the male female back forth... creates an interesting tug, you know... its odd, because its two people where there usually is just one... I think it takes a certain amount of trust, in self, in other, to write this style of poetry... a great collaboration.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Terry. Frieda is so very easy to write with. When I write with her it almost feels as.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Wow, I don't think anyone has ever popped their cherry in a review that I can recall...was it good f.. read more



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As always you two have created such beauty :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

It is easy when you write with someone as beautiful as Frieda. Thank you so much my friend.
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
my goodness, you two should get your pens together and hold a party and call us to witness the union between both your pens and we will raise our glasses up high and party really hard that your pens will come up with more bigger stuff. Bravo you two!!! you make my days here on wc

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Cassie, I am always up for a party!!!! The union of our pens, now that is cute. Dearly beloved, we .. read more
Cassie

6 Years Ago

cheers!!!!!!!
I'll have a dictionary at hand whenever I read your poems! You seem to never run out of beautiful words to adorn your poetry. I'm impressed all around.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Blue, I know I speak for Frieda when I say thank you for always being so kind to us. I am thrilled y.. read more
Blue

6 Years Ago

Always modest! You know I'm referring to both of you, Jack. :)
Jack...

6 Years Ago

Oh I know you are, but she is so much better looking than I am :) Thank you so very much.
very nice indeed, you two are awesome

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for visiting our poem today.
the sunrise blooms of your beauty
I gaze upon this tempting reflection
in limpid pools of dark sepia dreams
silently quenching my thirsty desires
Love this Jack....mostly impressed me your way of telling, that is very nice of you....love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ssadd, but most of the thanks goes to Frieda. This was a collaborative poem from the .. read more
Saddam

6 Years Ago

so tell her love behalf of me dear....
This is a captivating poem. Well written and full of depth. Excellent Job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I am happy you enjoyed our collaboration.
That's so beautiful. ^_^

Kaze~

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you. This was a collaboration between Frieda and myself.
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Its really beautiful. And your welcome.
This is so fantastic. It flowed so well, that I had nearly forgotten it was a collaboration. You two ROCK!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Coll. Frieda is an amazing poet and I so enjoy writing with her. She makes my job eas.. read more
Coll Silvermoon

6 Years Ago

Kindred spirits, for sure
a good work, enjoyed, all the best

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks Sayed, but Frieda gets the credit too on this one. I think you will find she is the best part.. read more
This is amazing. Job well done. Keep up the great work my dear friends.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tarry. Frieda is a dream to write with.
Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Yes, you two make a great team.

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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