Dawning of love

The dawning of love

 

You whispered your secrets

on breezes of starlight

of moonbeam collections

in night sky desire

 

Those twinkling phrases

beyond the horizon

which once held the sunset

in blistery fire

 

Beneath every pine tree

found evergreen wishes

with snow dressing branches

long winters to show

 

And springtime petunias

bloom fresh for the season

soft feathery visions

you want me to know

 

That here as we’re lying

this hillside of splendor

while counting the diamonds

a’ shine up above

 

Each sunrise of morning

a new day's beginning

right here in my arms is

the dawning of love

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This write is as stunning and shines just as brightly as the dawn. Beautiful write, Jack. You have outdone yourself again! :)

[Jack...]

Madalyn, I may need a bigger hat soon. Thank always for your kindness. I just love it when you visit my world.

[Madalyn Beck]

And I love it when you share your world!

[Vidya Bacchus]

If I could write one poem as beautiful as this I would be satisfied.

[Jack...]

Vidya, you have my friend. Your work is always so very beautiful. Thank you so much for your kindness.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you my friend you are too kind and you are welcome :)

[Lyn Anderson]

What a beauty of a poem. So polished to perfection, in form, font, style and word usage. While I personally like it when you dip in the bitter pool, your romantic, peaceful, soulful verses resonate ... you really are good at this genre.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend. Each days brings a different outcome with my work.

[Latifa]

I love the expression dawning of love, very beautifully written.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Latifa. I am thriled you liked this one.

[Cryingkate]

Oooooo.. The Image caught me immediately and Spoke of the lovely words coming beneath the Sunlight's arms.
fractals of colorful words indeed did project from this image.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I figured after a depressing Monday I might as well lighten it up a bit for Tuesday.

[Cryingkate]

LOl Jack wait till you read my next review that'll make ya giggle.. LOL

[Jack...]

Too late, already did. :)

[Sami Khalil]

This feathery vision is so beautiful and touching. Imagery is sublime...Bravo..................

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)........................

[Zahra]

Really beautiful, lovely imagery. A really bright poem. :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.