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Mysterious Nights

Mysterious Nights

A Poem by Phil & Bren's Collaborations

The night's mysterious shadows shroud my thoughts..
As darkness all pervades my very soul
What memories are varnished by the moon
Will I once again be fully whole?

O' thou whose spirit alights my soul,
Bestow your precious love to my aide.
Scaling heights of the shadows in the night,
At Eden's door, I will not be afraid.

I feel the strength of the night inside me
As the moon glistens on the water's side
I await your presence beside me
Whence I will then be satisfied....

'Mid sylvan glades and rose strewn paths.
As twilight falls with silver glow,
My thoughts imprisoned by desire's chains,
On wings of rapture we shall flow.

 

© 2008 Phil & Bren's Collaborations


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This poem you two wrote was just beautiful and meaning. I loved the picture with it. IT really goes with the poem. I agree with THE ROCK AND ROLL CO. it is full of intense mystery and enlightenment. Keep up the good writtings guys. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Full of such intense mystery and enlightenment... a really though provoking piece that has many interpretations. Awesome work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is awesome! What a fabulous writing team you two make!!! and love the pic too, perfect! This one might be your best collaberation yet! It's going into my favorites folders - Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Awesome piece!
Echoes of the metaphysical poets to me.
Great appreciation of language and imagery.
Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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My thoughts imprisoned by desire's chains,

How dang beautiful is that line! Wow. You guys are awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful piece. This is beautifully written and I love the picture.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful collaboration. So pleased you two are still writing together. You have gelled so good. And you make it look so easy.

Top marks my talented friends...x

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is well written and the two of you must feel similiar or feel life alike..I just wondered if one wrote a line and then the other or wa it 4 4 4 God bless..Valentine

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A lovely write and it's even more special as a collaboration! Bravo you two!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A great collab my friends~ wonderful blending of inks expressed so beautifully in poetic verse~
THanks for sharing this lovely piece~Fran

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Welcome Glitter Hi, I'm Phil and I live in Kent in the UK in a little village called Upnor which is right on the River Medway. Hi, I'm Brenda and I live in Georgia in the USA in a small town called .. more..

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