You and Only You

You and Only You

A Poem by J
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Nothing

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You and only you can make me smile

as if I was on top of the world

You and only you can make me cry

as if there was no tomorrow 

 

You and only you can inspire me 

as if I could write 100 poems in 10 minutes

You and only you can see through me

as if I was invisible

 

Why is it you and only you?

Why not the other?

It's simply because 

I'm in love with you and only you

© 2010 J


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Love is not something we can fully understand nor control.. once it invades our hearts.. the feeling is there and when or if it's real it's not something we can just make go away.. it takes time for it to fade away and that's only if we allow it.. usually once one becomes involved with another.. over time it fades faster. I loved the honesty running through this.. and yes love can inspire some of the finest work on earth.. so many great love songs were written in tribute to great loves! For 13 you sure did a great job of getting those emotions across.. now if only you could love homework that much.. you could do just anything with that kind of energy and emotions! lol.. I'm joking of course but not! I really enjoyed this one.. keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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OMg this is actually amazing. This is love , the power unexplained. a force so great. I miss it...... soo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is a really sweet poem. xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem is exactly how I'm feeling right now, soo you get extra point for that. Anyways, beutifully written and definetly appeals to the reader.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I cried reading this. No fair! This poem is perfect....it really is... I love it. It's going on my reading list!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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The simplicty of its structure makes it powerful, and it tears at one's heartstrings. Very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


:) good

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this poem here even though there are times in my life where I wish a girl would leave her boyfriend for me. Well, when the 'boyfriend' cheats on her, yells at her, treats her like crap, gets drunk on the weekdays... but in the same aspect, I know how it is to love only one person. Only one person can make you laugh, smile, or just simply put... feel. You convey your message clear which is important. Continue writing more and become the best you can become.

Posted 9 Years Ago


it can relate:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Simple structure, yet such a beautiful poem.
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Great work. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with LisetteCanWrite!, lol to her review too. But this is wonerfull and very nicely written. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on December 8, 2009
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