Fireflies

Fireflies

A Poem by J
"

I wanted to catch one

"
They light up at night
So fascinating in my sight
I hope to catch one someday
Whenever I do they fly away
They help me see
What's under that tree
And guide me always

© 2009 J


Author's Note

J
Short coz it's the only thing I've got T____T

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It may be short but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Sometime the greatest and most profound things can be said in one breath. :)

I like this.
It reminds me of all the times I've marveled at the fireflies myself.
Little baby star; I was convinced that's what them must be. ^-^
Lovely write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you have a great sense of rhyme... :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is really well detailed, the images coming through clearly. beautiful description of fireflies.

Posted 9 Years Ago


It may be short but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Sometime the greatest and most profound things can be said in one breath. :)

I like this.
It reminds me of all the times I've marveled at the fireflies myself.
Little baby star; I was convinced that's what them must be. ^-^
Lovely write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Takes me back to summer nights when I was a kid. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SO CUTE!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short but very sweet. good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, that was nice to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet ..:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a pleasant piece to read, a bit fanciful. I liked it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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