Butterfly Kiss

Butterfly Kiss

A Poem by J


I stood by the corridor

Waiting for someone to talk to me

A girl I knew, not knew but loved

Suddenly stood beside me

Neither of us made a move

Obviously, I was nervous

I looked at her confidently,

Waiting for the perfect timing

My mind wandered slowly

Thinking, looking for a strategy

How am I supposed to kiss her?

How am I supposed to make her love me?


Again, I took a glimpse of her

This time I caught her looking back at me              

I felt that she was nervous too

I knew she felt the same way I did

For the 3rd time I looked at her

This time I was sure

I was going to kiss her

I was going to make a move

But she got me first

I felt my Heart stop beating

She gave me a butterfly kiss

Her lips were as sweet as flowers

They were as light as the clouds

I'll never forget this day

The day my Love gave me a Butterfly Kiss


© 2010 J

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Aw, how sweet! I like ur use of simile. great write! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well that was a very sweet poem, simple and calm, and touching as well. It's funny how things just happen when you least expect it, and how quickly they happen. I enjoyed reading this, keep it up :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

wow...just..wow very beautiful and well done. i love the flow and depth of it. and i like the line "but she got me first" too cute! XD

Posted 9 Years Ago

beautiful and sweet poem, and very heartwarming. thank you for sharing this piece. wonderful job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

i like how it made me miss my loved one and yes ill never forget that day either. this here is a great way to remember that day well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, lovely, hopeful poem..
Butterfly kisses are the best..
Very nice piece hre :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago

very sweet piece here - very gentle and loving - well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 6, 2010
Last Updated on February 6, 2010




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