Succubus

This one might take you alittle on the dark side. A sort of sinister lust.

If I promised to kiss you deadly

would you let me near your neck

to dance my tongue on wicked flesh

and cure my inner leck

 

If I promised to make it painless

Could I burrow in your thoughts

Scratch and claw into your mind

In search of whats not sought

 

If I promised to kill you gently

and inhale your peachy scent

Can I lay you down forever under

Stop dreams of slow descent

 

If I promised to kiss you deadly

and savor those soft sweet lips

Would you sell your soul

and end your life

to feel my leather whip

 

 

Author's Note

A fun little piece I did to try a different perspective.

Reviews

[Pretty Faces Split Open]

"If I promised to kiss you deadly" is such a great line.

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not sure about the leather whip thing..lol
No really this is really good. Wonderful read, flows wonderful.

[GlamGirl]

Wow! I was bored and looking for something to read. I did not expect this!
Very good!

[Aleyah]

perspective changes are good, this one turned out nicely. I like the intensity of this poem, it's capturing, and the imagery is wonderful...and haunting at the same time! Anyway, fantastic poem, I love it :))